Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Bits and Pieces: The Archives

You never really know where you might find inspiration for a story.  But then sometimes you find something that is a huge treasure trove of possible story leads that you know you will be playing with it for a long time. 

Recently the game Elder Sign came into my possession.  This is a Gas Light detective game.  Gas Light is essentially the brand of stories brought about by H.P. Lovecraft.  They aren't quite Steampunk but they also aren't the Gothic Romance of Dracula. 

In Elder Sign you play a detective that is exploring a museum.  While you are exploring an old god is trying to come into the world through a gate.  The objective is to find enough Elder Signs to close this gate and stop the end of the world.  Simple enough and a fun game.  But for writing, there is something more. 

The board for this game is actually a set of cards.  Each of these cards has a description, as if it were written by H.P. Lovecraft.  There are also mini cards with monsters on them with similar descriptions.  For writing, these short descriptions are a great jumping off point for stories. 

Today's Bits and Pieces, came from one of the rooms in the game.  So without wasting anymore time I give you "The Archive."


 
The Archive
 
 
 
They had spent hours digging through old magazines and news articles. They came out with next to nothing pertinent for their troubles. Other than time spent in the archives the day had been fruitless.
That is until Dave found the article that had everything they were looking for. How to stuff an olive was the title. The article had nothing to do with olives or even stuffing anything for that matter. It was an old piece from the original town paper, dated June 4, 1785. It was hard to believe that it was still in a decent enough condition to be read.
He took the article to the photocopier and placed it on the glass. It was quick work to make a couple copies before he put the article back where he had found it. “Did you find anything else?”
Sarah blew the dust off an old magazine, read the title then put it on one of the piles next to her knee. “Not really. Seems most of the stuff in here is everything but what we’re looking for.”
“Let’s call it a day and get some dinner.” He checked the time on his watch. “We have been in here way too long today. Leave your piles; we’ll get back at it again tomorrow.”
She stood up careful not to disrupt the stacks of magazines around where she was sitting. She stepped over a stack to get onto the clear walkway.
He took her hand and with one last look he shut the lights off, and then stepped out the door. He locked the door from the outside and they followed the main hall to the parking garage.
 
The parking garage was darker than he had expected. The few lights that were working allowed for eerie shadows. Worse, one of the lights was flickering in its last stages of life. Theirs was the only car still in the garage. This gave them a nice open area where nothing could hide on the way to their car. That didn’t really help with the surreal quality of the lighting.
The soft scraping of their shoes echoed in the empty garage. She latched onto his arm with her free hand, her other hand, the one already in his, squeezed his tight. It wasn’t like they had never been the last ones to their car, but time in the archives did something to you. Maybe it was all the dust. Inhaling that much dust while doing research, was never a good thing.
They stopped at her side of the car first. He unlocked the door then held it for her, closing it after she was safely inside.
Sarah sat inside the car in silence waiting for him to come around and join her in the driver’s seat. She was ready to leave. She was safely buckled and settled. She looked out the driver side window as she reached over to unlock the door for him. He wasn’t there.
She looked out the back window. This game was getting old. He wasn’t there either. The parking garage lights flickered again. There was a knock at her window.


16 comments:

  1. Fantastic! that is so creepy at the end - in a good way. Totally took me by surprise, though , of course with your prompt I knew something was going to happen. Great stuff. Thanks for the post.

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    1. In the 80s Time Life books had a series about different aspects of magic and mythical creatures. One of the books was titled Wizards and Witches (google search it was the Enchanted World series). There is a story in that book about the devils library. The gist of the story is it is the place where seekers of forbidden knowledge go to do research. You can stay as long as you wish. But the price for the knowledge is, the last person to leave the library pays with their soul.

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    2. I remembered that story after I had written this one. It can be crazy where your mind takes you sometimes.

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  2. Ooh great story! I love the suspense in the ending, I wish it continued!

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    1. Sometimes our own imagination can be so much scarier than what ends up on the page. (The thoughts from this one actually made it hard for me to go to bed the night I wrote it).

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  3. Are you gaining inspiration from this? :) Just curious...

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    1. The story is what I wrote from a line or two on one of the cards.

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  4. I love when something we never thought would, would inspire us to come up with something so great. wonderful post

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  5. Great post. I agree with Morgan, I also wished the story continued.

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    1. My beta readers (my wife and oldest daughter) said the same thing when they read this one.

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  6. These little glimpses you give us into your writing are pretty cool. I've never read anything by H.P. Lovecraft, but I've read about him. I also took an online survey once of writing styles, and my WIP was compared to him. I guess I should read something by him one of these days...

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    1. Lovecraft's style follows with others of the era at times. It is a bit flowery. But at the same time he can draw you deeply into the madness with his imagery. My worst time every reading his stories was when I worked as a third shift gate guard at the Welch's plant in Lawton Michigan. Alone in the middle of nowhere reading horror stories makes for a very spooky shift.

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  7. Well, that ended with a freak out!

    If you like the game, you might want to watch this youtube video about it: http://youtu.be/Jh4nSpV2n4k

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    1. I love Geek and Sundry and watch Table Top every two weeks when it comes out. The show has been a source for new board games lately.

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  8. I so badly want to know how it ends! I love suspenseful endings. Sometimes I like to answer for myself what happens and make up the ending but other times I wish somebody would tell me. I love discovering new ways to find prompts. Your game suggestion is awesome.

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